HDR AWM ( American War Memorial )Makati, Philippines

aerosmith9110aerosmith9110 Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
edited July 13, 2009 in Landscapes
C&C always welcomed. Will add others ASAP
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4.don't mind the crane below got no time to remove it yet..
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  • Jack'll doJack'll do Registered Users Posts: 2,977 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    That original one is a very beautiful and peaceful image and my favorite of the bunch. thumb.gifthumb I think it would gain a lot by cropping out that partial row of crosses and background tree on the right leaving just a bit of the open space between the first row and the new right edge.

    Jack
    (My real name is John but Jack'll do)
  • aerosmith9110aerosmith9110 Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    Jack'll do wrote:
    That original one is a very beautiful and peaceful image and my favorite of the bunch. thumb.gifthumb I think it would gain a lot by cropping out that partial row of crosses and background tree on the right leaving just a bit of the open space between the first row and the new right edge.

    done. better? tnx that was fast :D

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    opps havent removed the crane yet here :D
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  • thapamdthapamd Registered Users Posts: 1,722 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    A beautiful place. Nice HDR work.
    Shoot in RAW because memory is cheap but memories are priceless.

    Mahesh
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  • d7freestylerd7freestyler Registered Users Posts: 48 Big grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    I'm not usually a big fan of HDR images because a lot of times they are too unreal looking to me, but these are fantastic. I absolutely love the first image. (and it looks better with the new crop) Remove the crane there and it's spot on! Great set. thumb.gif
  • EiaEia Registered Users Posts: 3,627 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    The first one is my favorite! thumb.gifVery pretty!
  • Jack'll doJack'll do Registered Users Posts: 2,977 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    done. better? tnx that was fast :D

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    opps havent removed the crane yet here :D

    At first I thought "how could I have missed that crane in the original post?" But then saw that when you did the crop from the original, you forgot to remove it. I do think this is a nice improvement. I like how the rows of crosses now seem to emanate from a single point. Now if you could only arrange to have that building demolished... :D

    Jack
    (My real name is John but Jack'll do)
  • aerosmith9110aerosmith9110 Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    Jack'll do wrote:
    At first I thought "how could I have missed that crane in the original post?" But then saw that when you did the crop from the original, you forgot to remove it. I do think this is a nice improvement. I like how the rows of crosses now seem to emanate from a single point. Now if you could only arrange to have that building demolished... :D

    will try later but not good yet with cs.....


    Never got these kind of overwhelming good response... come to think this is first hdr attempt and got my first dslr on may 28 2009 :D don't even have a tripod yet! clap.gifivarwings.gif
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  • rontront Registered Users Posts: 1,473 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    I like the pictures! As far as the HDR work is, you have not gone overboard which IMO is good, but there is some halos around the photos which should be removed.

    Ron
    "The question is not what you look at, but what you see". Henry David Thoreau

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  • aerosmith9110aerosmith9110 Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    ront wrote:
    I like the pictures! As far as the HDR work is, you have not gone overboard which IMO is good, but there is some halos around the photos which should be removed.

    Ron

    what are halos are those when 2 pictures combined ( overlapping something that seems to be 2 picture super imposed )? or the glowing of the tree for example? ne_nau.gif
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  • aerosmith9110aerosmith9110 Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    newly improved through your C&C
    Tnx Guys...thumb.gif
    hope i can clone better...
    but if you don't know the building exist is it still noticable on the bad cloning?
    just started using cs a few days ago...
    Please don't tell me to remove the other trees also.. :D but it really seems to be better ( for me ) if just 1 tree left standing...

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  • rontront Registered Users Posts: 1,473 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2009
    Yes, the halos are around the edges, generally where there is a lot of contrast. If you used Photomatix on these,, a lot of times the halos can be lessened by using less aggressive settings for Strength and Color Saturation.

    Ron

    what are halos are those when 2 pictures combined ( overlapping something that seems to be 2 picture super imposed )? or the glowing of the tree for example? ne_nau.gif
    "The question is not what you look at, but what you see". Henry David Thoreau

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