a few of my portraits

MyCrazyMannyMyCrazyManny Registered Users Posts: 1 Beginner grinner
edited July 20, 2009 in People
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2009
    MyCrazyManny wrote:
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    The first shot is really interesting - you've captured the feeling of the small child in the big world - the curiosity and also the isolation. Very nice.:D
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  • KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited July 20, 2009
    I think #2 is the best of the group... i like the flying hair and the light on the face. It might not hurt to burn out the white sneakers (or tennis shoes, or trainers, or whatever you might call them :) ) of the person standing behind and to the right; they are a little distracting to my eye.

    the 'framing' in #1 seems to be too close to the subject, I feel like he needs a little more space around him. #3's conversion seems off on this monitor, but it could just be this screen; it doesn't do well displaying BW images. If it's not just this monitor, however, it might be worth it to retry the conversion and try to get a wider range of tones because it appears to be stuck in the middle-tone range to me.
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