Nice shot but the black background seems to be swallowing her up.
The black background gives her body a weird shape.
Did you color in the black background to cover up other objects in the photo?
There is a lighter shade of black behind her head that is distracting.
A hairlight or separation light above and behind a bit would have been nice to seperate the subject from the background without adding too much light if any at all to the subject's face. Just my amateur opinion. Otherwise, nice shot.
Nice model!
I see you have two light sources. From my experiece the most efficient way to usem is ANYTHING but putting both in front.
Key and hair (full frontal, angled, or diagonal), fill and rim, two rims... The list goes on and on...
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The black background gives her body a weird shape.
Did you color in the black background to cover up other objects in the photo?
There is a lighter shade of black behind her head that is distracting.
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Joe
North View Studio
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Montreal, Canada
I see you have two light sources. From my experiece the most efficient way to usem is ANYTHING but putting both in front.
Key and hair (full frontal, angled, or diagonal), fill and rim, two rims... The list goes on and on...