Road Trip Shots

anwmn1

Additional Pictures can be seen in Landscape and Journey categories but I am looking for some C & C on a few particular images.

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Thanks!

anwmn1

bump for critiques....


Anyone want to critique these? Any ex WP people out there?

adbsgicom

Non-professional opinion:

First one, I think, would be better with the subject in focus and the reflection out of focus (I may be wrong on that, though). The texture out the window (trees?) makes everything in the window soft already.

In the second one, I'd have cropped the people upriver out of the frame and gone square aspect. The lighting is cool on the foreground, and the background seems like clutter (IMHO).

anwmn1

adbsgicom wrote:

Non-professional opinion:

First one, I think, would be better with the subject in focus and the reflection out of focus (I may be wrong on that, though). The texture out the window (trees?) makes everything in the window soft already.

In the second one, I'd have cropped the people upriver out of the frame and gone square aspect. The lighting is cool on the foreground, and the background seems like clutter (IMHO).

Appreciate you taking the time to comment.