Website feedback?

dragon300zxdragon300zx Registered Users Posts: 2,575 Major grins
edited June 24, 2005 in Mind Your Own Business
Hey guys wanna give me some feedback on this site.

www.studioorangellc.com
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www.zxstudios.com
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  • SamSam Registered Users Posts: 7,419 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2005
    dragon300zx wrote:
    Hey guys wanna give me some feedback on this site.

    www.studioorangellc.com
    My first thoughts are:

    Who and what is Studio Orange?

    What will Studio Orange do?

    What is a membership, and who would want to be a member?

    Sorry if this seems critical, but I think people today and especially on the internet have VERY short attention spans. I think you need to grab them visually, tell them in seconds who you are and what you do. After this you can slow down a little and provide details, because anyone left after the initial 10 or 20 second read will have at least some interest.

    That's my 2 cents.

    Sam

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  • dragon300zxdragon300zx Registered Users Posts: 2,575 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2005
    My thoughts exactly. But I didn't create the website. I'll have to do some editing of it tomorrow. Jeff just doesn't get the whole marketing thing.
    Everyone Has A Photographic Memory. Some Just Do Not Have Film.
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  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited June 24, 2005
    dragon300zx wrote:
    Hey guys wanna give me some feedback on this site.

    www.studioorangellc.com

    I like the look and the name. Easy to remember. A clean look.

    The copy confuses me, which isn't hard to do. Is it a studio facility for rent? Or is it a photography business? At first I thought it was a studio for rent, but then I saw the demo piccies of people outside, so I decided it must be a photography service. headscratch.gif But then that doesn't explain the membership thing. ne_nau.gif
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  • dragon300zxdragon300zx Registered Users Posts: 2,575 Major grins
    edited June 24, 2005
    Yeah my partner in the studio didn't lay it out right cause he was thinking about one thing before the other.

    Since we won't be using the studio 100% or the time and when we open we will have two studio rooms, and rather than hiring photographers, and having to pay them and all that crud, we are going to try a different approach to renting studio space than is being used up here. Basically they will get time in the studio and be part of our advertising, etc. Thats the whole membership thing (it's a long explination of the whole system thing that I won't get into right now). But we will also be offering it as a full service photography studio. He is putting the membership before the services, where as right now the services need to be on their first. It will get corrected tonight.
    Everyone Has A Photographic Memory. Some Just Do Not Have Film.
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  • Shay StephensShay Stephens Registered Users Posts: 3,165 Major grins
    edited June 24, 2005
    There is nothing there yet, just a place holder page. Ask again when the full website is up mwink.gif


    dragon300zx wrote:
    Hey guys wanna give me some feedback on this site.

    www.studioorangellc.com
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