There is something je ne sais quoi that prevents me from completely enjoying this picture. Her (her) right hip? Her right leg/knee? The background?
I wonder if this would be better if:
* you would go even lower, to the the ground level, so the concrete block she's stnading on would "block" most of the beach (ferri's wheel is OK)
* she could thrust herself forward thus arching the whole legs-body entity and thus creating a much needed major curve to the otherwise rectangular image.
OMG, that is so weird. I've shot someone RIGHT there before. hahaha. Are you following me around?
I agree with the previous poster. Perhaps she's also a touch too lean for her own good(she's fantastic looking don't get me wrong) but the accent of a curvier woman would go well in juxtaposition with the harsh angles of the metal. The background is also sort of just... there.. No real inherent explanation to it, unless you already know that's at the end of the very precarious rocks in Ocean City. Kudos to her for hiking all the way out to that little tower.
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Thanks for the look and comments! Moving around out there is very slippery and dangerous...lol You're always only a step away from sliding into the ocean.
Thanks for the look and comments! Moving around out there is very slippery and dangerous...lol You're always only a step away from sliding into the ocean.
I almost lost my 580ex in the drink during a shoot, pretty much right where you're standing. VERY precarious.
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Moving away from photography and into cinema. PM me if you have questions about DSLR workflow or production questions.
Film Reel: http://vimeo.com/19955876
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There is something je ne sais quoi that prevents me from completely enjoying this picture. Her (her) right hip? Her right leg/knee? The background?
I wonder if this would be better if:
* you would go even lower, to the the ground level, so the concrete block she's stnading on would "block" most of the beach (ferri's wheel is OK)
* she could thrust herself forward thus arching the whole legs-body entity and thus creating a much needed major curve to the otherwise rectangular image.
Just thinking out loud...
I agree with the previous poster. Perhaps she's also a touch too lean for her own good(she's fantastic looking don't get me wrong) but the accent of a curvier woman would go well in juxtaposition with the harsh angles of the metal. The background is also sort of just... there.. No real inherent explanation to it, unless you already know that's at the end of the very precarious rocks in Ocean City. Kudos to her for hiking all the way out to that little tower.
Moving away from photography and into cinema. PM me if you have questions about DSLR workflow or production questions.
Film Reel: http://vimeo.com/19955876
I almost lost my 580ex in the drink during a shoot, pretty much right where you're standing. VERY precarious.
Moving away from photography and into cinema. PM me if you have questions about DSLR workflow or production questions.
Film Reel: http://vimeo.com/19955876
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