#31, maybe

Sylvia_ADVSylvia_ADV Registered Users Posts: 14 Big grins
edited August 19, 2009 in The Dgrin Challenges
Ok here is mine. Hope it cuts it.

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  • KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2009
    Hey Sylvia!

    I like the idea of the shot and the narrow DOF, but I would tone the saturation and contrast down a notch. Would it be possible to do a reshoot? In a reshoot, I'd aim for a clear shot of the flower without any leaves or anything blocking the view of the flower and try to sharpen up the focus as well. I like how it feels like we're in deep inside the bush discovering this single flower. :)

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  • adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2009
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    Nothing grabbed me as being particularly in focus, the the twigs in the forground really distrcted me.
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  • KatmitchellKatmitchell Banned Posts: 1,548 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2009
    adbsgicom wrote:
    15524779-Ti.gif

    Nothing grabbed me as being particularly in focus, the the twigs in the forground really distrcted me.

    15524779-Ti.gif.. A blossom works but you need a clean shot...

    Can you re-shoot?

    Kat
  • whitericewhiterice Registered Users Posts: 555 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2009
    15524779-Ti.gif +1

    I hope you can reshoot because there is potential here.
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