Whip me on my photoshop

eyeguy

So I am working my way through Scott's 7-Point System with some extra help from OnOne. Please comment on what I did good on and what I could do better.
Thanks for your time.
Dean


The base texture is from a close up of a part on the old farm equipment with an overlay of canvas then removed from the equipment.

jeffmeyers

A suggestion. Straighten the horizon in all of them. I think that would help.

eyeguy

jeffmeyers wrote:

A suggestion. Straighten the horizon in all of them. I think that would help.

good one I missed that. I have fixed two of the three but will keep the original photos in place for this posting. Thanks for the help

thapamd

Nice treatment on all, but #3 is my favorite here. I think the subject is a little too centered, however.

Miguel Delinquento

I'm not a fan of any quite honestly. The third one is the most interesting, but the tones seem to mush together a little too much. Beyond post processing, the image is too static, and I don't get a sense of scale (or wonder) about what you are presenting.

M

eyeguy

eyeguy wrote:

So I am working my way through Scott's 7-Point System with some extra help from OnOne. Please comment on what I did good on and what I could do better.
Thanks for your time.
Dean


The base texture is from a close up of a part on the old farm equipment with an overlay of canvas then removed from the equipment.

Fixed the horizon in two of the photos and cropped