Terrific! :ivar The composition here really works - and the space between them, with her hand reaching out, and his apparent obliviousness, is really wonderful. I might play with the contrast a bit, but that's a minor issue. Really nice!
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I like the image a lot [hopefully this isn't a death knell for it since from a PJ point of view I'm generally wrong...]. I like how the image is opening to the left where the woman is headed and shrinking to the right on the man's side. I would have liked a small bit of light above his head, like he still had a little bit of room in his shrinking envelope.
I did a quick rework on the contrast and black point of the image. I felt that the arm reaching back wasn't distinct enough from the traffic. Does this version improve?
I did a quick rework on the contrast and black point of the image. I felt that the arm reaching back wasn't distinct enough from the traffic. Does this version improve?
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Terrific!
"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
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I like the image a lot [hopefully this isn't a death knell for it since from a PJ point of view I'm generally wrong...]. I like how the image is opening to the left where the woman is headed and shrinking to the right on the man's side. I would have liked a small bit of light above his head, like he still had a little bit of room in his shrinking envelope.
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Definitely!
"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
Either way, good capture, and yeah, the contrast helps.
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