Challenge 42: Under The Roof

douglasdouglas Registered Users Posts: 696 Major grins
edited June 30, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
Just a simple shot taken under a covered rest area on a bike trail.

Taken on 3-27-05
F 2.8
1/20 sec
converted to b&w

Best regards,
douglas
Best regards,
douglas

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  • 4labs4labs Registered Users Posts: 2,089 Major grins
    edited June 29, 2005
    douglas wrote:
    Just a simple shot taken under a covered rest area on a bike trail.

    Taken on 3-27-05
    F 2.8
    1/20 sec
    converted to b&w

    Best regards,
    douglas
    It might be simple but its very well done!
  • douglasdouglas Registered Users Posts: 696 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    4labs wrote:
    It might be simple but its very well done!
    Thank you 4labs, I appreciate your viewing and comments.

    Best regards,
    douglas
    Best regards,
    douglas
  • thegreeneggthegreenegg Registered Users Posts: 551 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    A very nice black and white image. The lines are very appealing and the image is just very crisp.
    Ashley
    Green is the way to be!
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  • hesaiashesaias Registered Users Posts: 186 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    Awesome! The angles are very appealing to the eye. Nice crisp lines.
    Scott

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  • DeanMcMDeanMcM Registered Users Posts: 265 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    I like it!
    I think this is great. thumb.gif
    Dean - New York
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  • HiggmeisterHiggmeister Registered Users Posts: 909 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    Hi Dougles,
    I also like this shot. 3 or thirds keep repeating here, whether accidental or intentional, and is a nice effect. The only thing I could suggest would be to crop for more symmetry, if you can. The boards that make up the "Y", put the top left line into the corner and the bottom to equidistance in the frame. Not sure if your original could pull this off, but I think it would add some to the shot.

    Just my .02 to an already good shot,
    Chris

    A picture is but words to the eyes.
    Comments are always welcome.

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  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited June 30, 2005
    nice job on the conversion. very crisp. thumb.gif
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  • douglasdouglas Registered Users Posts: 696 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    Higgmeister wrote:
    I also like this shot. 3 or thirds keep repeating here, whether accidental or intentional, and is a nice effect. The only thing I could suggest would be to crop for more symmetry, if you can. The boards that make up the "Y", put the top left line into the corner and the bottom to equidistance in the frame. Not sure if your original could pull this off, but I think it would add some to the shot.

    Just my .02 to an already good shot,
    Chris
    Hi Chris, Unfortunately this is the full frame I tried doing some cropping but I ended up unsatisfied with the results so I left it as shot. But I do agree with you because after reviewing the photo later the "Y" is what really caught my eye. I think a revisit with my tripod and more time spent composing could improve this alot.

    Thank you very much for your input.

    Best regards,
    douglas
    Best regards,
    douglas
  • douglasdouglas Registered Users Posts: 696 Major grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    Thank you everyone for comments, much appreciated.
    Best regards,
    douglas
    Best regards,
    douglas
  • melmel Registered Users Posts: 80 Big grins
    edited June 30, 2005
    Like it a lot, too! It just has lots of nooks and angles to explore. Good depth.
    ~mel
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