Kristine the Conqueror
PhotosbyKW
Registered Users Posts: 137 Major grins
This is a photo that I took of Kristine in MI. last year. The knife is from the movie, The Hunted. It comes with the option of kydex plastic or custom leather sheath. It was requested by the man who makes the leather sheaths for the knife.
Her skin and other overall colors were true to scene but her eyes had an unnatural blue tint to them. She'd previously had eyeliner on so that may have had something to do with it, but we didn't notice it at the time. Anyway- Following some good advice here, I spent quite a bit of time getting Vista to save Adobe Gamma settings and then I duplicated the layer and just desaturated the offending areas. I tried to resize it drastically but even at 50 percent, I couldn't get it to load here, so forgive me for having to use the PROOFED one from the Smugmug page. What do yall think of the revision?
Her skin and other overall colors were true to scene but her eyes had an unnatural blue tint to them. She'd previously had eyeliner on so that may have had something to do with it, but we didn't notice it at the time. Anyway- Following some good advice here, I spent quite a bit of time getting Vista to save Adobe Gamma settings and then I duplicated the layer and just desaturated the offending areas. I tried to resize it drastically but even at 50 percent, I couldn't get it to load here, so forgive me for having to use the PROOFED one from the Smugmug page. What do yall think of the revision?
0
Comments
Guessing that this is the case:
Sometimes I've thought that magazines etc. for "more male oriented" products that use a female model tend to forget the product and only worry about the model. If this is what moves product, then OK, but it doesn't work on/for me. I'd suggest a more product centered image; of course she's helping to draw attention to the product, so she's a primary aspect of the image, but the product itself needs to be more of a primary, rather than secondary or tertiary focus point, I'd say.
OK, I've got opinions. They're mine and I share them, maybe too easily. However.... Bluntly, this is what I saw when I looked a the image:
1) eyes/face
2) eyes/face
3) breast
4) eyes/face
5) your text (where I got the knife sheath bit from)
6) eyes/face
7) knife sheath.
One more comment on model pose/props: the hat being at that angle, with the fluff on her forehead and the general lack of clothing said to me: unrealistic.
I said earlier I prefer realistic! Forgive me. I know a lot of men prefer a soft-touchable woman, even dressed up as if she's hard and tough, over a truly hard and tough woman.
Like I said, if it moves product...
(Admission: I'm somewhat hesitant to post this....)
NTWPhotos.com
Member, Livingston County Photographers Group (http://livcophotographers.com)
If responding to a picture I've posted: please, provide constructive criticism. Destructive criticism can go take a flying leap.
If we don't know what could be improved or could have been done differently, we'll never know how to get better at what we're doing.
www.PhotosbyKW.smugmug.com
May I ask: where in Michigan?
I live pretty south (Brighton, N of Ann Arbor), but used to be in Houghton (Keweenaw Peninsula, UP Michigan).
NTWPhotos.com
Member, Livingston County Photographers Group (http://livcophotographers.com)
If responding to a picture I've posted: please, provide constructive criticism. Destructive criticism can go take a flying leap.
If we don't know what could be improved or could have been done differently, we'll never know how to get better at what we're doing.
We also spent some time up on Bois Blanc Island, which is just a wonderful place to camp, if you get the chance.
KAW.
www.PhotosbyKW.smugmug.com
eyes face
eyes face
boobs ... lol jk
Ok..I think its a creative composition for sure.. Im not sure what you were looking for as far as CC but I can tell you my HO. I think generally speaking "less is more" for product photography. I felt very distracted by all that was going on in the image.. the mud, moss, woods, I would have never guessed it was a product photo if I had not read your post. Because the product is sooo low in the image... my attention keeps wandering up to the top 2/3 of the image... and there is something off about her eyes... and expression that is distracting. I dunno.. I picture something covering her face (the hat pulled far forward.... like shes looking down) or even her looking off into the woods to bring my attention back to the sheath... does that make sense?
Newest baby: R.Gonzalez PHOTOGRAPHY or HERE
My rambling addiction: Crunchy Monkeys
facebook fan page: R.Gonzalez photography
:ivar
www.PhotosbyKW.smugmug.com
Bois Blanc Island: wow! That does look like a nice place to go, just based on how far north it is. Being an island near Mackinac, I figure it must be pretty nice on the "naturey" scale, if you will.
NTWPhotos.com
Member, Livingston County Photographers Group (http://livcophotographers.com)
If responding to a picture I've posted: please, provide constructive criticism. Destructive criticism can go take a flying leap.
If we don't know what could be improved or could have been done differently, we'll never know how to get better at what we're doing.
www.PhotosbyKW.smugmug.com
Were can I buy one......
These days, this fits right in. The fact that the leather sheath is clean highlights it greatly.
Very nice....thanks for sharing
It's not what you look at that matters: Its what you see!
Nikon
http://www.time2smile.smugmug.com
Knife is a TOPS Tracker, and sheath is from Hedgehog Leatherworks.
KAW.
www.PhotosbyKW.smugmug.com
Nate, are you a former Techie by any chance? I graduated about a year ago... Just wondering.
(sorry for the thread hijack)
http://blog.timkphotography.com
(wait, I just dated myself, didn't I? Oh well.)
NTWPhotos.com
Member, Livingston County Photographers Group (http://livcophotographers.com)
If responding to a picture I've posted: please, provide constructive criticism. Destructive criticism can go take a flying leap.
If we don't know what could be improved or could have been done differently, we'll never know how to get better at what we're doing.