A Young Man's Fancy Turns To..........

willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
edited September 16, 2009 in People
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It is better to die on you feet than to live on your knees.....Emiliano Zapata

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  • QarikQarik Registered Users Posts: 4,959 Major grins
    edited September 16, 2009
    the composition is lovely. but overall the shot looks soft and colors are off..look at the skin tones, they are bit too orange imo.
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  • MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited September 16, 2009
    willard3 wrote:

    I like it. Especially like the bridge and the dreamy reflection in the water.

    Do wish you hadn't cut off the young peoples heads in the reflection tho. :D
  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited September 16, 2009
    willard3 wrote:
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    I'm going to take a chance and assume you want an honest response...rolleyes1.gif

    This was a great idea, but...the shape of the rock on which the couple is perched is quite disconcerting and intrusive - I'm reminded of the hookah-smoking catterpiller in Alice and Wonderland perched on the giant toadstool;
    The way the young man's arm is draped around the young woman in looks like he's clinging to her for his life to avoid falling off the toadstool/mushroom;
    The color balance is off - and disconcerting.

    But, this is a good idea. I'd get them back in that area and try again. keep shooting! :D
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  • willard3willard3 Registered Users Posts: 2,580 Major grins
    edited September 16, 2009
    Thanks all for looking and commenting.
    It is better to die on you feet than to live on your knees.....Emiliano Zapata
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