Senior Photos! Would Love some C&C!

ScootersbabygirlScootersbabygirl Registered Users Posts: 224 Major grins
edited September 20, 2009 in People
Hi! I did a quick Senior photo shoot a few days ago and would love to hear some C&C on these! I know there are definitely a few mistakes, and the more I can learn, the better! Thanks!

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(She wanted some really seriuos ones too)

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http://www.randileephotography.com

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  • mercphotomercphoto Registered Users Posts: 4,550 Major grins
    edited September 18, 2009
    Scootersbabygirl wrote:
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    You cropped off her foot. :(
    Bill Jurasz - Mercury Photography - Cedar Park, TX
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  • ScootersbabygirlScootersbabygirl Registered Users Posts: 224 Major grins
    edited September 18, 2009
    mercphoto wrote:
    You cropped off her foot. :(

    I know! I caught that immediately afterwards and kicked myself in the butt hard. But I still love the look of it. I'm still learning to make sure that I see everything with my eye before snapping the photo!
    http://www.randileephotography.com
  • KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited September 18, 2009
    I really like that first one... tones, composition, treatment... very nice!

    Second looks a touch flat to me - but I'm not using the best monitor....

    What about a little dark vignette on the third? Some way to darken the background/edges a very little bit and really bring attention to the subject? ne_nau.gif
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  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited September 20, 2009
    The first one would be more artsy if the subject placement was more along the lines of the rule of thirds. Where is she walking to? Maybe if she was stradling the line while showing alittle attitude. The 2nd and 3rd have no direction of light. Because of that they are flat. You got to have some direciton to the light to create that shadow to give the photo depth.
    Charles
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