Two Lovely Ladies

sweet carolinesweet caroline Registered Users Posts: 1,589 Major grins
edited September 24, 2009 in People
Here are a few from a session I did yesterday. C&C always welcome. I'm hoping to post a few to Go Figure later.

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  • Miguel DelinquentoMiguel Delinquento Registered Users Posts: 904 Major grins
    edited September 22, 2009
    Number 3 is my favorite followed by number 7. The backgrounds in most of these I find distracting. I do like the colors though.

    In number one, her eyes look a little too sleepy and the background is too busy. Number 2 she looks good, background ditto. Number 3 feels good and the background is minimal.

    The clothing the woman in the remainder of the shots is wearing is not very flattering. Nor is the reflection of her position in the mirror. Number 6 has decent color, but the tan wall and lighting is distracting at the left of the frame. And her expression is odd. Number 7 would be better if her eyes faced the camera just a bit more. The creases on her dress are problematic too.

    M
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  • blaser321blaser321 Registered Users Posts: 201 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2009
    I like the lighting and the shots the only one I don't like is 5 the reflection of her in the mirror is not right
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  • WingsOfLovePhotoWingsOfLovePhoto Registered Users Posts: 797 Major grins
    edited September 23, 2009
    I like the 3rd one! The lighting is nice. Not overdone but I also find the background distracting except on the last 2 where it all seems to blend :D They should be happy!
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  • KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited September 24, 2009
    #5 is not showing

    The background in the first few is really too distracting for me, even in #3.

    #6 is my favorite - best position, background, expression, exposure... very well done.
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  • ivarivar Registered Users Posts: 8,395 Major grins
    edited September 24, 2009
    I agree with most of the others; #3 and #7 do it for me thumb.gif The lady in the first few shots seems a bit more relaxed in general than the one in the last few shots, although she seems to have gotten more relaxed in the last shot. I also agree that the bg is a bit too distracting for my taste. In general though: very nice! clap.gif
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  • RicherSeaRicherSea Registered Users Posts: 18 Big grins
    edited September 24, 2009
    You seem to be working well with the models, with good poses and expresions. The big distraction, as others have said, is the backgrounds. You need to do something to either get them out of focus or darker than the models.
    Andy

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  • sweet carolinesweet caroline Registered Users Posts: 1,589 Major grins
    edited September 24, 2009
    Next time I shoot with these ladies, I'll unclutter backgrounds before we shoot. I've been cloning out lamps, etc. Laughing.gif. Now that they've seen these, and feel good about how they look, I think they will be much more comfortable next time around and willing to do whatever it takes to get good shots. The first model was much more at ease.

    Caroline
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