Very nice candid capture. I like the first one better...this is only my viewing on my work monitor that is uncalibrated. As for treatments...lol....you may want emergency room treatment for the little boy who's getting choked out by his "loving" sister lol ... aahhhh sibling rivalry.
I also like the first treatment the best. The second one feels more grey and flat, while the first has pop and jumps off the page. What are the treatments you used?
What a great capture! It really shows the spirit of the family.
Very nice candid capture. I like the first one better...this is only my viewing on my work monitor that is uncalibrated. As for treatments...lol....you may want emergency room treatment for the little boy who's getting choked out by his "loving" sister lol ... aahhhh sibling rivalry.
Nice capture indeed! But waaay over sharpened. It looks like you traced a line around them.
I like the original (the third one) much better. BD is correct: too much sharpening. I'd also tone down the vibrance (if you are using Lightroom) some and the saturation a little bit. The red is overcooked. And the white balance is off a bit too. Too cool.
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What a great capture! It really shows the spirit of the family.
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upon a 2nd look..I much profer #1 over #2. Ii look at the dad in #2, hsi face looks over textured
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Nice capture indeed! But waaay over sharpened. It looks like you traced a line around them.
"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
That may be due to the fog in the background. I hardly sharpened at all. Here is a completely unsharpened version. Do you see the same thing?
M
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