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2 blue options (DSS 35)

SmithySmithy Registered Users Posts: 151 Major grins
edited October 13, 2009 in The Dgrin Challenges
I would love some C&C on these two. I think the welder is a much stronger image, but there's some subtle beauty in the hills, too... let me know what you think!


Blue Flame

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Blue Ridge

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    MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    Both very nice, but #2 is closer to theme, I think.
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    FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    It took me a while to "get" #1 - I didn't make out the welder just the blue light!!

    I think #1 would be stronger with a closer crop on the welder. Maybe a vertical crop. Maybe even square. But closer.

    I like #2 as well.The blue tones are very evocative - such a peaceful feel to the picture.

    For the challenge, I vote for #1 - with a crop.

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    adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    I'd go with Virginia's suggestion on #1. Crop it in tighter. #1 is more interesting, the blue light of the welding is exactly what is should be (no color modification necessary), and the orange color of the sparks give it pop and contrast.
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    MrsCueMrsCue Registered Users Posts: 412 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    I love #1 it's an amazing capture. I also agree with the closer crop.
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    sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    What an amazing array of different color temperatures; Blue welding, yellow sparks, green fluorescent, and red/orange incandescent.
    I agree that to have it fit the challenge a tighter crop on the blue is necessary but it will be a shame to lose the bouncing sparks and wonderful mix of other colors.

    The other doesn't do anything for me, even though it is blue.
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    NetterNetter Registered Users Posts: 80 Big grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    sherstone wrote:
    What an amazing array of different color temperatures; Blue welding, yellow sparks, green fluorescent, and red/orange incandescent.
    I agree that to have it fit the challenge a tighter crop on the blue is necessary but it will be a shame to lose the bouncing sparks and wonderful mix of other colors.

    The other doesn't do anything for me, even though it is blue.
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    SmithySmithy Registered Users Posts: 151 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    If I could have found a cleaner spot that didn't have so much shrubbery around it, I think #2 would be better than it is.

    Here's a crop of #1, though...

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    I think my favorite thing about it, is that it catches the three primary additive colors (red green and blue) while highlighting the theme, "Blue". Pure chance capture, right place/right time and had the camera handy.
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Great pic! You might consider cropping out the doorway altogether.
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    SmithySmithy Registered Users Posts: 151 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Like this?


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    adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Ship it !!
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    sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Smithy wrote:
    Like this?

    Yes like that! - Now it works perfectly for the theme.
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    KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Yeah, that's awesome! Nice shot (and crop!) :)
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    SmithySmithy Registered Users Posts: 151 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Thank you all very much for the help and guidance, I feel like I'm starting to see things from the photographer's perspective more and more now, which is the whole reason I'm playing in this sandbox. I am truely grateful for the education I'm getting.
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