Lexie.

gavin

shoot from last week, any suggestions?

Cheers!

rhondavid

Pretty girl and nice poses. May be my crappy monitor but the focus seems to be off a little. I like to see nice crisp images of the face and eyes in particular. Focus seems to be a little more on the scarf in the closeup that her eyes. Are there others you can share with us?

adbsgicom

I like the second one best. At this resolution, the first is really hard to assess how sharp she is in the original, but she does seem soft. Also there is a bit of the background blown out and the camera-left side of her face seems a bit bright.

The second one is sweet. It looks like she is ready to burst out laughing. Exposure seems right as well.

RBrogen

Very nice Gavin. I like your DOF control on these....they also seem to have a very slight blue tint but it could be the monitor that I'm using at the moment. I'll check again when I get home on the calibrated one.

ivar

Very nice

Whatever softness there may be, it really doesn't bother me at all. The colors are a tad cold, meh.
Nicely done

anwmn1

I agree with Ivar. The technical details or color and exposure do not bother me at all with these shots. Very pretty girl which I think will make a great model for you.

My only real issue is her pose in the second shot. She seems very apprehensive and closed off with her facial expression and arms crossed.

The first one is a great pose though and just screams teenage girl.

Kinkajou

Just saw these... I've been slackin', I know!

I really like that second shot - I agree about the focus, but other than that I think it works really well!

Nicely done - thanks for sharing.