These are nice but I suspect you could do much better. Most of these don't capture her face or his at the best angle-- they're mostly profile-ish shots that don't make full use of their expressions. In #2, her hair is in her face. And #3 and 4 are shot from very unflattering angles for the female model. She also has light glare under her eye in #3 and 4.
I also wonder what shooting from a ladder could have added to at least a couple of shots.
Just my two cents. Just trying to help, not trying to rake you over the coals.
These are nice but I suspect you could do much better. Most of these don't capture her face or his at the best angle-- they're mostly profile-ish shots that don't make full use of their expressions. In #2, her hair is in her face. And #3 and 4 are shot from very unflattering angles for the female model. She also has light glare under her eye in #3 and 4.
I also wonder what shooting from a ladder could have added to at least a couple of shots.
Just my two cents. Just trying to help, not trying to rake you over the coals.
Pete Thanks for the CC! Some good advice here. You did not offend me.
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I also wonder what shooting from a ladder could have added to at least a couple of shots.
Just my two cents. Just trying to help, not trying to rake you over the coals.
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