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#35 round 2 bake off!

MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
edited October 15, 2009 in The Dgrin Challenges
I had this in my original thread, but opened a new thread to try to get some more eyes and hopefully some solid criticism. Took the two images people liked best and threw in a reshoot. Have at it!

#1 Doodle
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#2 Sketch (yes, this is a reshoot)
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#3 Self Portrait, Blue Period
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    adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    #3.
    Looking back at the crayons, there's too much detail there -- dust, little threads, that take away from the main subject idea. I'd go with your homage to Pablo Picasso.
    - Andrew

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    divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    I personally love the SP - no idea how it will strike the judges, but I think it's great idea, and just plain fun!
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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    I love the detail in the crayons, but they don't do as much for me as the SP.
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    KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Yet again, I'm the odd man (girl?) out and like 'sketch' the best. :)

    I like the focus on the line drawn with the crayon and that little bit of crayon-wax hanging onto the tip.
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    MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    I am concerned that the SP needs too much specialized knowledge to make a strong entry, but what the hell. In honor of Pablo's home country, I shall go a-tiltin' at windmills. :D

    Thanks to all for the feedback. thumb.gif
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    adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    put (ala Picassso) in parens after the title.... It might jog a few memories.
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    MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    adbsgicom wrote:
    put (ala Picassso) in parens after the title.... It might jog a few memories.

    Snuck the "clues" into the keywords mwink.gifdeal.gif

    I'm sneaky that way.
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    MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    Kinkajou wrote:
    Yet again, I'm the odd man (girl?) out and like 'sketch' the best. :)

    I like the focus on the line drawn with the crayon and that little bit of crayon-wax hanging onto the tip.

    I figured you might like the close up with the narrow depth of field. :D
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    KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited October 14, 2009
    MarkR wrote:
    I figured you might like the close up with the narrow depth of field. :D

    Yeah, yeah... you got me :D
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    sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited October 14, 2009
    The SP has grown on me - I like it best out of the three
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    MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited October 15, 2009
    sherstone wrote:
    The SP has grown on me - I like it best out of the three

    Thanks. thumb.gif I don't think I have a snowball's chance this contest, but I had fun and learned a few things, esp. regarding the replace color tool ...

    I actually thought of taking a picture of blue-dyed milk and eggs, and calling it "Breakfast at Beru's", but that might even be more obscure than the Picasso homage ... rolleyes1.gif
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    The Curious CamelThe Curious Camel Registered Users Posts: 943 Major grins
    edited October 15, 2009
    I like the sp best.

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