My Daughter and a Green Door

DionysusDionysus Registered Users Posts: 226 Major grins
edited October 20, 2009 in People
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-=Ren B.=-

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  • adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 19, 2009
    Nice shots. I love how she's standing in the first one, how she's on the sides of her feet and all. Light looks friendly to your cause -- natural light coming from camera-right or did you help the light along in some way?

    Only problem is I don't like the hinge going through her head.
    - Andrew

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  • DionysusDionysus Registered Users Posts: 226 Major grins
    edited October 19, 2009
    ya i love the candid feel of the first.

    and i was thinking of getting rid of that hinge as well...since it was so distracting...but i thought the color of the door might be enough to distract from it..but apparently not Laughing.gif

    Light was natural, no flash or anything, just lucky to have it falling just right.
    -=Ren B.=-

    Gear: Canon EOS 50D, 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6, 55-250mm f/4-5.6, 50mm f/1.8, Canon 430EX-II Flash
    Galleries: Smugmug Flickr DeviantART
  • adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 19, 2009
    I can almost ignore it in the first, but the second is too hard to ignore, then I can't help seeing it when I look again as #1.
    - Andrew

    Who is wise? He who learns from everyone.
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  • cletuscletus Registered Users Posts: 1,930 Major grins
    edited October 20, 2009
    Really like that first shot! Second shot is nice as well, but I like the first a little more.

    In shot #1 up on her shoulders the pink in the jacket seems too hot. Notice how in shot #2 you can see the texture in the fleece throughout the jacket? The shoulder areas in #1 are lacking that texture (at least on my monitor.) Any way you could recover some detail in those areas?
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