It is interesting but isn't really doing anything for me. Not sure why not. The white background seems a little distracting, perhaps. Perhaps someone who really loves watchworks will have a better take on it.
I think it would look better if everything was clean and precise. It looks like trying to be two things: 1) technical drawing-type precise X-Ray transparent-layer views of innards of watch; 2) old, weathered document / faded-photo type thing
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…and to me, it ends up being neither
Too much info!
…but each a neat idea, though
- Wil
I had the same idea but wanted get another opinion. I think Wil nailed it.
Sam