The Gambia

AndMan

Not sure if you would call these street or PJ but I'm sure a mod will move them if appropriate.

A few years ago I took a short trip to The Gambia and on one day managed to get a walk into the local village. It's hard to get natural shots as when an outsider with a camera is seen you tend to get mobbed by the kids. However none were posed just as natural as possible. All taken with a P&S.

The first few are in the local school room, and yes it is made of corrugated metal.

#1


#2


I was struck by how incredibly happy these kids were given the abject poverty (for us) that they live in.
#3


#4


#5 Our guide advised us to buy sweets to hand out as its cheaper than money. This is pretty much as soon as my partner stepped out of the door.


#6 Doing the laundry


Thanks for looking, c&c always welcome.

adbsgicom

Nice series. Thanks for sharing them, and the bit of backstory on your trip. The third one is my favorite of them in how the kids are acting, and the one girl who is holding her position away from your shot (or at least ignoring the boys since she is looking at you in the first one).

HoofClix

Maybe it's not "street," but at least as far as I'm concerned it is photojournalism, which does belong here.

Excellent series in my opinion. Would love to hear more of the story after you get some comments..

As for photo quality, I think all of them could do with a little more contrast to richen them up some.

tortillatorture

i have to echo Andrew, the nr 1 and 3 stands out as the strongest of the bunch,
even though i dont know the countrys full story
i understand how every moment must have been special.

AndMan

Thanks for the comments guys, they are much appreciated.

Mark, I've upped the contrast a little and replaced the originals. Are these better or worse?

Just for info:
Gambia is a predominantly muslin country in west africa.
It is the starting point for "Roots", with the original slave camp a few miles upriver from where I was on the coast.
1/3rd of the population live below the international poverty line.

The trip to the local school room came about as my partner was a teacher and the images were taken for her to show her class. All the images were originally colour and I converted in pp.

Here is one more image neither street nor PJ.
Me at the local crocodile pool.

rutt

This is the best of the bunch by far. The subject is very interesting, but the others lack a visual hook.

bdcolen

rutt wrote:

This is the best of the bunch by far. The subject is very interesting, but the others lack a visual hook.

Definitely! The framing, the expressions, the arrangement of the kids - it all comes together in this image in a way it doesn't in the others.

AndMan

Rutt thanks for the c&c I appreciate it.

bdcolen wrote:

Definitely! The framing, the expressions, the arrangement of the kids - it all comes together in this image in a way it doesn't in the others.

B.D. thank so much for taking the time to c&c my efforts, I really appreciate it.
I knew that #4 was the strongest image, as the rest were taken more as a documentary type exercise to show kids in the UK some small glimpse at life in Gambia (particularly school life).

Once again thanks for the c&c gentlemen.

HoofClix

Yes, the contrast adjustment is better, could even go more, but it's fine as you displayed it.

I now what you are all saying about #3, but #4 is my favorite, with imo a wider range of expressions. I also like seeing kids from a lower angle..

AndMan

Cheers Mark