Deer at Richmond Park, Surrey, UK

Jay925Jay925 Registered Users Posts: 24 Big grins
edited October 30, 2009 in Wildlife
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/jack-fitzsimons/4037899360/&quot; title="Grazing. by Jack Fitzsimons Photography, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2620/4037899360_efc741969f_b.jpg&quot; width="1024" height="768" alt="Grazing." /></a>

They aren't usually so quiet and placid, so I took the opportunity to get as close as possible without spooking it. Still needs some PP work and I think the colours could be brought out slightly more although I'm not sure how.

C&C appreciated and welcomed,

Jay.
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Comments

  • Mark EdellMark Edell Registered Users Posts: 672 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2009
    Jay, nice job on getting that close, they are not easy to sneak up on.

    Overall you have a nice shot here. There is some motion blur with the head and ears, you must have caught him in mid "flick" :D Never underestimate PP, there is a lot to work with here. I hope you don't mind but I reworked it a bit so you can see what can be done.

    Here is what I did...

    *Slight shadow and highlight adjustment
    *unshapen mask
    *Adjusted saturation
    *used dodge tool to bring out the eyes some more
    *used burn tool to darken background a bit (helps make the subject pop)

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    Keep them coming!!
  • NetgardenNetgarden Registered Users Posts: 829 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2009
    Hi Jay, How great to have deer around. They fascinate me because we hardly ever see them in so. cal! I'm trying to figure out where the focal point was. The face looks a little soft, but I can't tell if it was back focusing a tad? You might try a smaller focal point area too, so uncontrasty colors don't fool the autofocus area.

    Forgot to say, Mark, I do think your processing did it well!
  • Jay925Jay925 Registered Users Posts: 24 Big grins
    edited October 30, 2009
    Thank you
    Thanks for criticism and PP. Much appreciated. Guess I should play around with Photoshop and Lightroom more over the Christmas season to get to grips with it more and attempt to produce some better resultsmwink.gif
    - D3000
    - F501
    - F80
    - 18-55 AF Nikkor
    - 28-80 Zoom AF Nikkor
    - 18-55 VR
    - 18-105 VR
    - 70-210 AF Nikkor
    - Tamron 70-300 Telephoto

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/jack-fitzsimons
    http://wix.com/JFPhoto/JFPhotography
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