I like the set as a whole. They are well lit for my taste, and the poses are cute
Number 4 is one of my favourites, but there seems to be a shadow on her cheek from the flash, maybe move her forward a bit more next time? Anyhow, did you use a two light setup for this?
My not-so-professional 2-cents on the others:
#1 felt soft, and I'm not sure about the fashionably ripped jeans. The shadows are a bit hard here as well.
#2 nice idea, but she kinda squished her face more to camera-left that didn't convey to me the idea of mom reveling in the kisses.
#3 I like the idea, but her hand feels dominant to the shot instead of his and his watch isn't that nice, so I'd ditch it in any future shots.
#6 I like this idea too. Perhaps if you shot more down from above him so we saw his shoulders and head and his kids looking up at him with the grass as the bg it would have worked better (or not...)
This is the second set of them (at least), so clearly they like what you are producing! Congrats on the repeat biz!
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Nice shots! Some seem a bit on the dark side, not sure if that was your intention or not. #5 jumps out for me, very nice!
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Thank you Idlewild.
You're correct, 1 & 8 were the same. Thanks for bringing that to my attention and thanks for looking and commenting.
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Number 4 is one of my favourites, but there seems to be a shadow on her cheek from the flash, maybe move her forward a bit more next time? Anyhow, did you use a two light setup for this?
Thanks for sharing!
Joe
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My not-so-professional 2-cents on the others:
#1 felt soft, and I'm not sure about the fashionably ripped jeans. The shadows are a bit hard here as well.
#2 nice idea, but she kinda squished her face more to camera-left that didn't convey to me the idea of mom reveling in the kisses.
#3 I like the idea, but her hand feels dominant to the shot instead of his and his watch isn't that nice, so I'd ditch it in any future shots.
#6 I like this idea too. Perhaps if you shot more down from above him so we saw his shoulders and head and his kids looking up at him with the grass as the bg it would have worked better (or not...)
This is the second set of them (at least), so clearly they like what you are producing! Congrats on the repeat biz!
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