What more could I do?

TNTATCTNTATC Registered Users Posts: 53 Big grins
edited November 4, 2009 in Weddings
Hi everyone this is a shot I took of my wife. I was using my Xti and the lighthing was kinda weird that morning. I did what I could with it and I love the pic but feel like i'm at a wall with it. Let me know what you think, were gonna re shoot with my new gear sometime soon. Thanks

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  • timk519timk519 Registered Users Posts: 831 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    I'd recommend posting your pic here:
    http://dgrin.com/forumdisplay.php?f=30
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  • cj99sicj99si Registered Users Posts: 880 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    What have you done? Id more than happy to throw a version at you, check my site and email me.
  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    CJ makes a good question. I would like to see this in color.
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  • squiddysquiddy Registered Users Posts: 161 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    Might make more of a pop with a more contrasted black and white instead of grayscale.

    What exactly did you do to get it to look this way? Before & after would probably help a lot.
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  • TNTATCTNTATC Registered Users Posts: 53 Big grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    I couldnt figure out how to add more than one pic. But i'll throw them side by side and post it.
  • TNTATCTNTATC Registered Users Posts: 53 Big grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    This is the Original as you can see it's crap.
    I just saw the Refine forum so i'll def be putting some pics on there to get torn apart. I need that
  • AgnieszkaAgnieszka Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,263 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    Hi there.

    Love the pic. If you have troubles posting more than 1 pics at once, check out the link in my signature thumb.gif
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  • BlurmoreBlurmore Registered Users Posts: 992 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    Print this on metallic paper and it will be hawtness, the skin tones will really sparkle.
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  • TNTATCTNTATC Registered Users Posts: 53 Big grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    I just figured out how to add the mult pics on the journey forum posting pics. So i'm set now, still learning daily. Thanks I maybe try the metalic paper idea and see how it comes out.
  • zoomerzoomer Registered Users Posts: 3,688 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    She is a knock out...next shoot fly me down to help...just kidding.
    I think the picture looks pretty good as it is. With the elements you have in this shot it comes together pretty well.
    Did you take any other ones in this setting?
    I don't really love flare shots...
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  • JohnBiggsJohnBiggs Registered Users Posts: 841 Major grins
    edited November 4, 2009
    I dont like the straight arm or her being centered.
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