Lobster Boat

zach30345zach30345 Registered Users Posts: 95 Big grins
edited November 6, 2009 in Street and Documentary
Alright so i am somewhat a beginner and i would appreciate some critique of the below photo. It was taken in southwest harbor in Maine over the summer. Thanks Zach

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  • sara505sara505 Registered Users Posts: 1,684 Major grins
    edited November 6, 2009
    Alright so i am somewhat a beginner and i would appreciate some critique of the below photo. It was taken in southwest harbor in Maine over the summer. Thanks Zach

    4077976963_9e0181d2cc_b.jpg

    I like this photo - the subject, the overall shape of the boat, there's enough going on to catch my attention, and I like the BW.
  • zach30345zach30345 Registered Users Posts: 95 Big grins
    edited November 6, 2009
    thanks
    alright thank you, is there anything you would do to improve this photo?
  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited November 6, 2009
    alright thank you, is there anything you would do to improve this photo?

    Well, this photo? Maybe try to pull some of the shadows of the wheelhouse out. But otherwise, it is what it is. But if I were in a similar setting, I would probably have moved around 15 or 20 feet to the camera right so that the vessel's stern is receding.

    Happy to see you in this forum and looking forward to more shots!
  • zach30345zach30345 Registered Users Posts: 95 Big grins
    edited November 6, 2009
    alright thanks for your advice, but the problem with moving was i was on the end of another dock with very little room to move between boats and other obstructions.
  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited November 6, 2009
    Get much closer. The people are probably interesting, but we can't really see them at this distance.
    If not now, when?
  • zach30345zach30345 Registered Users Posts: 95 Big grins
    edited November 6, 2009
    okay how is this?
    1. 4080291473_4a861a4334_b.jpg
    2. 4080313851_c5ab57257d_b.jpg
    also how would i go about lighten up the shadows in the wheelhouse, i can lighten them up on the entire picture but when i did that it didn't look as good
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