#2 looks a bit forced (my kid's the queen of that). The dark spots under the eyes seem to exaggerate that perception (to me).
#3 I just love the look of confidence in it.
This kid is adorable and I love the way his hair and skin tones work with the fall theme. My favorite by far is #1, although I like all of them a lot. His eyes are really sharp in it.
This kid is adorable and I love the way his hair and skin tones work with the fall theme. My favorite by far is #1, although I like all of them a lot. His eyes are really sharp in it.
Gorgeous shots!!! What a star model you have there! He seems to enjoy being the focus of the camera very much! I love all of his expression. One handsome little guy! Great shots!! Love the leaf bokeh. Thanks for sharing
Reeeeallly nice, Randy (although have you forsaken the 135L so soon? Traitor )
I'm normally a big bw fan and I"ll be interested in seeing conversions, but on this occasion I'm not so sure that bw is the way to go - his hair is so "autumn" that it's just perfect with all those leaves!
Nice work, great model.<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p> <o:p></o:p> The only thing I can critique is #3<o:p></o:p> <o:p></o:p> Nice DOF, but the leafs in the foreground to the left are a little distracting. There is an unsymmetrical leaf blur from right to left ending close too close to the models head. If this where evened out a little your attention would go straight to that beautiful child.<o:p></o:p> <o:p></o:p>
Reeeeallly nice, Randy (although have you forsaken the 135L so soon? Traitor )
I'm normally a big bw fan and I"ll be interested in seeing conversions, but on this occasion I'm not so sure that bw is the way to go - his hair is so "autumn" that it's just perfect with all those leaves!
Hey Divamum...thanks for the kind words. I am a bit biased on the color version on this right off the bat for that and the other reasons mentioned but I figure I'll give it a whirl and ya never know right.
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Thanks for commenting PupWeb. I was shooting over a pile of leaves with the intent of creating a "windowed" affect using the DOF for the frame. These are almost SOOC with just sharpening and minor cropping applied and a slight vingette. I might pp again to see if that can be addressed. Thanks again.
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My only small qualm is that for some reason my eye is drawn to the dark line spiking out from his back, the break in the backgrounds.
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Thanks laurenornot. That black line is actually a tree in a neighboring yard.
Hey Mitch. Thanks for the kind words. I did get low ...I was laying on my belly shooting the 70-200 L at f/2.8.
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#3 I just love the look of confidence in it.
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Shooting wide open too, that lens seems to be working very well for you.
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Thanks Joel. That is probably my favorite lens right now.
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Thanks for the kind words Nora.
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Number 3 is the winner for me! Very nice use of DOF. :ivar
I think they all would look brilliant in B&W... *hint..hint..*
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Thanks Ivar...... I'll take a shot at B&W versions and post them
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I'm normally a big bw fan and I"ll be interested in seeing conversions, but on this occasion I'm not so sure that bw is the way to go - his hair is so "autumn" that it's just perfect with all those leaves!
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Nice DOF, but the leafs in the foreground to the left are a little distracting. There is an unsymmetrical leaf blur from right to left ending close too close to the models head. If this where evened out a little your attention would go straight to that beautiful child.<o:p></o:p>
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Hey Divamum...thanks for the kind words. I am a bit biased on the color version on this right off the bat for that and the other reasons mentioned but I figure I'll give it a whirl and ya never know right.
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Thanks for commenting PupWeb. I was shooting over a pile of leaves with the intent of creating a "windowed" affect using the DOF for the frame. These are almost SOOC with just sharpening and minor cropping applied and a slight vingette. I might pp again to see if that can be addressed. Thanks again.
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