New model, Yvette.

gmonkeh

Was doing a shoot a couple of days ago and Yvette happened to be there. I was able to get her to do a few shots. She's never modeled before, but she's good in front of the camera.

Thank you for taking your time to look. Questions, comments, critiques all welcome.

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gmonkeh

wow, no love. goes and sulks in the corner.

Jwar

ok, i'll be first...I'm a N00B, so whatever this is worth....

#1&2 look a little bit awkward, maybe it's just me. Something about the pose.

#3 The WB might be off a bit. Her tanned shoulder doesn't look as tanned as in the other ones.
#4 is the best, she's got such a great smile.clap

#5 is nice.

Overall, beautiful model and you've got some nice shots!

sweet caroline

You bet she's good in front of the camera! I like the lighting in #1- everything about this one works for me. #3 is my favorite expression, but the stray hairs are a little distracting. Her smile is great in #4, but I don't like the background and the softness is bothering me. #5 I like the colors and light (although she has some hot spots), but her neck looks a bit short and stiff.

See if she'll model for you again!

Caroline

JimBarryPhotography

Very nice!
Excellent exposures all. I like the lighting and the red wall works very well as a backdrop. The only critique I would offer is that when posing a model, in most circumstances, keep her shoulders back and her back a bit arched. It will feel very awkward to her if she's not used to it but odly, it will eliminate the hunched shoulders and give a more relaxed pose. She did this, at least to some degree, in the last image. A much more natural looking posture. Of course, if that was the posture you were after, ignor me completely, what do I know

Hope you don't mind some cc. Overall though excellent images. Nice work!