You handled some difficult lighting and got some good detail in your images.
Now you have to work on your composition of your captures.
#1,#3 and #4 are too centered. Your subject is looking off to frame left so usually you would want to compose or crop the image so the subject is in the first third of frame right.
Harry http://behret.smugmug.com/NANPA member How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
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Now you have to work on your composition of your captures.
#1,#3 and #4 are too centered. Your subject is looking off to frame left so usually you would want to compose or crop the image so the subject is in the first third of frame right.
http://behret.smugmug.com/ NANPA member
How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
--Rick