I like them both but I think I'm going to agree with Colleen on this one. Second Photo seems like more of a Professional Portrait to me. Thanks for sharing!
2 for me! I don't feel that seeing her shoes in 1 add much. The leaves feel deeper in 2 because I can't see her shoes poking out, and my eyes go right to her eyes.
PS - I might clone out that tiny bit of blue in the bottom right hand corner.
Elaine
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As if it needed saying again, #2. It focuses you on the subject, with just enough of the setting to get the idea without overwhelming the person. Nice color, nice light.
They are both very nice pictures. I agreed with most of the comments here. #2 is slightly better, more "portrait" feel, and does leave some of the imagination in tact. However, as a parent, I like #1. I like the shoes, I like seeing how she was "sitting" in the leaves and not just her pretty eyes and smile.
Just my two pennies.
Oh, thanks for sharing.
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WOW. Eketelon....Warner Robins, GA huh....I lived there from time to time as a young boy. My grandparents had a house right at the end of the runway of the base *LITERALLY* OMG the noise.
Thanks for all of the kind words Smithy, AAABlustocking, Eketelon, David & Titanic.
WOW. Eketelon....Warner Robins, GA huh....I lived there from time to time as a young boy. My grandparents had a house right at the end of the runway of the base *LITERALLY* OMG the noise.
Yeah, Warner Robins. We've been here since '95 and it has been ok. It's a blessing to not have any worries or concerns but there is not much to say for the town. If we want some action or something, we have to take a trip. Case-in-point; I had two young children to photograph this past Saturday and I wanted a scene like the one in these shots you've shared. Can I find that here???? NO!
All-in-all, it's been good though.
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1 -- nice shot; 2 -- little better. Nice picture!
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really cute ..
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Very nice!
Virginia
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PS - I might clone out that tiny bit of blue in the bottom right hand corner.
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Elaine: I was actually thinking about that since I had the same feeling that it detracted from the "depth" of the leaves.
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Just my two pennies.
Oh, thanks for sharing.
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Gotta vote for the second one as well. Really shows off her eyes and precious face. Very nice capture!
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WOW. Eketelon....Warner Robins, GA huh....I lived there from time to time as a young boy. My grandparents had a house right at the end of the runway of the base *LITERALLY* OMG the noise.
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Yeah, Warner Robins. We've been here since '95 and it has been ok. It's a blessing to not have any worries or concerns but there is not much to say for the town. If we want some action or something, we have to take a trip. Case-in-point; I had two young children to photograph this past Saturday and I wanted a scene like the one in these shots you've shared. Can I find that here???? NO!
All-in-all, it's been good though.
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