lynn's facial curves 43

lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
edited July 16, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
comments?? :dunno

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  • kudbegudkudbegud Registered Users Posts: 190 Major grins
    edited July 15, 2005
    thats pretty kewl lynn. the thing that distracts me are the dark blobs in the cut-out areas, but you may not have had control of those
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  • SandySandy Registered Users Posts: 762 Major grins
    edited July 15, 2005
    I agree, it is a cool photo, but I too think it could be stronger.
  • pathfinderpathfinder Super Moderators Posts: 14,708 moderator
    edited July 16, 2005
    lynnma wrote:
    comments?? ne_nau.gif

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    Great subject thumb.gif Now have your SO hold a black or a white sheet up behind it as a background and hit it with a little side lighting!!
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  • erich6erich6 Registered Users Posts: 1,638 Major grins
    edited July 16, 2005
    I agree with the commments so far. This is a good subject and the image has a lot of potential. If you can't get back to the place and reshoot you may want to crop tighter and get rid of the base. Also some selective burning might help.

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  • DavidoffDavidoff Registered Users Posts: 409 Major grins
    edited July 16, 2005
    I agree, very nice. Could you shoot it from the front, with a slight angle ?
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