Where I found myself Saturday
bdcolen
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"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
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Sorry for your loss...
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Without the casket, it would have been just another shot of the choir - which, by the way, consists entirely of 'kids' the deceased taught as chorus director for decades in Ludlow.
As to shooting - it's just another part of life. (And the son of the deceased said to go for it if I could be discrete.
"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed
I did not notice the casket on first glance, too busy looking at the faces, did a big double take when I realized why the choir was there.
The backstory to your shot, about the choir, adds another unexpected element.
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The photo, B.D., would make an excellent addition to a series or photo essay in which the back story is provided. Without it there's just not much there except a funeral I'm afraid.
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I have shot at a few funeral receptions, but never had the nerve to pull out the camera when the coffin was around.
To pick a nit, I wish he'd caught the man's hand in a different position, not obscuring the face of the woman behind. I also wish for a lower camera angle.
These and previous crits all quite valid. It may well need the backstory, and if it does, it fails as an independent image. It might indeed do better in a series, though I hope it doesn't need that. As to the hand position and call for lower camera angle, movement made the first difficult, and being discrete would have forced me into a belly-shot for the second, which would have made framing anf worrying about that hand all the more impossible.
And, yes, thank you, the other shot is much stronger - and I'll post it later today.
Finally - remember that tomorrow is turkey shoot day!:D
"He not busy being born is busy dying." Bob Dylan
"The more ambiguous the photograph is, the better it is..." Leonard Freed