Julia cc welcome

blaser321

Well its been one year that I got my first camera 5d mkII its been a steep learning curve
and I have come a long way since my first post here but I know I have a long way it go
but at least now I get paid for some shoots its been fun here is some shot of Julia
cc welcome


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2

3

4

5 tried a smoke machine and a light for the BG

6

7

8

blaser321

anyone?

Photosbychuck

1) Nice shot but her eyes seem soft.

2) Great Shot

3) Nice pose but I don't care fore the blue light.

4) Great Shot, I would crop more off the bottom.

5) Great Shot but watch cutting off parts of the hand.

6) Great Shot, I would crop some off the left side.

7) Great Shot, I would crop some off the left side so she is not centered so much.

8) Nice shot but underexsposed a bit much for my taste. I would like to see more detail in her hair around her face.


Take Care,
Charles

CTUphoto

Think I like 2 and 4 the best out of the series. Her facial expression doesn't change much throughout....all serious, most with the mouth partially open and a hint of teeth but no real smile. Would have liked to see some change there. Interesting use of the smoke on 5. I didn't read your note on it at first look and thought it was just a change of background. Would agree with Charles on the use of the blue light on #5. Not my favorite. 8 is definitely a bit underexposed (IMHO).

~jb

VayCayMom

I've been meaning to make this comment for sometime, your posts have really shown your great progress with each and every one ! You consistantly post great stuff ! You are an inspiration, thanks !

gmonkeh

#6 for the win for me on this set. As mentioned before the expressions are all the same across the board. I know it's tough just starting out to get what you want out of your subject. Just remember keep a conversation going it will put the model at ease and you as well.

In terms of the background move the subject away at least 5 feet to lessen the details of the folds and other distractions. I see you tried to clone it out but why go through the extra effort when you could have gotten that on camera.

blaser321

Thanks for all the comments I was just going for some different looks like the blue light
the smoke BG and the low key I'm wondering did I mis on the low key or the way I did it was just not so appealing?
And I am not ably to move the subject out any more for the BG as I just don't have the room I my try some seamless black paper

InsuredDisaster

I like them generally. However, 7 does not work for me. I just think the angle makes me think of giraffes and dwarves at the same time.

8 does strike me as a bit under exposed.


Nice work overall!

ivar

Nice set I think my comments reflects the others; My favorite is the 2nd one, and I'm not too crazy about the last two.