Omen

dlplumerdlplumer Registered Users Posts: 8,081 Major grins
edited December 8, 2009 in Wildlife
Considering this for the mega challenge. The theme is "one word". Please give me your thoughts.

Thanks,

Danny

Omen

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  • Ric GrupeRic Grupe Registered Users Posts: 9,522 Major grins
    edited December 5, 2009
    I'd get rid of whatever that is on the left. I think there still will be enough room for composition.

    The vignette is fine...see what a lighter one would look like.

    Great subject, pose and perch.

    I might try making the shot warmer too...not sure.

    Just noticed...I'd get rid of some of the saturation of the blue in the shadows...particularly in the face area.
  • dlplumerdlplumer Registered Users Posts: 8,081 Major grins
    edited December 5, 2009
    or maybe this:

    Hooters

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  • SnowgirlSnowgirl Registered Users Posts: 2,155 Major grins
    edited December 5, 2009
    Love your sense of humour. Hooters works!

    The first shot, Omen, seems sharper to me. But the second one's name really works.
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  • MaestroMaestro Registered Users Posts: 5,395 Major grins
    edited December 5, 2009
    Mmmmm...well first I am jealous. I never seem to be able to find owls of any sort even though I know they are near me. I agree with Ric's comments about the first image although I tend to like the darker feel since the title is, "Omen." The second one would be great but it looks like the second owl was added with some Photoshop magic. I would just remove it. The first I can't tell if if it was added but the first one to the left alone would be make a for a nice pic, but then again, you would lose your title. mwink.gif
  • Dennis KaczorDennis Kaczor Registered Users Posts: 2,413 Major grins
    edited December 5, 2009
    I agree with Ric on getting rid of the left side as I too think there is enough to play around with, and maybe a warmer tone to the over all image would work well. Good compostion here.
  • HarrybHarryb Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 22,708 Major grins
    edited December 8, 2009
    Hey Dan,

    I love that image. I played around with it a tad (adjusting contrast, warming it up, cropping out the tree on the left, etc.)

    I got images that looked different but none that had the mood of your original. Cropping on the left loses the feel of the original so I wouldn't recommend that, Maybe cloning out the tree might work better. Warming it up a tad might improve it slightly also.

    Your original is marvelous and I wouldn't play around with too much.
    Harry
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