Mmmmm...well first I am jealous. I never seem to be able to find owls of any sort even though I know they are near me. I agree with Ric's comments about the first image although I tend to like the darker feel since the title is, "Omen." The second one would be great but it looks like the second owl was added with some Photoshop magic. I would just remove it. The first I can't tell if if it was added but the first one to the left alone would be make a for a nice pic, but then again, you would lose your title.
Dennis KaczorRegistered UsersPosts: 2,413Major grins
edited December 5, 2009
I agree with Ric on getting rid of the left side as I too think there is enough to play around with, and maybe a warmer tone to the over all image would work well. Good compostion here.
I love that image. I played around with it a tad (adjusting contrast, warming it up, cropping out the tree on the left, etc.)
I got images that looked different but none that had the mood of your original. Cropping on the left loses the feel of the original so I wouldn't recommend that, Maybe cloning out the tree might work better. Warming it up a tad might improve it slightly also.
Your original is marvelous and I wouldn't play around with too much.
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The vignette is fine...see what a lighter one would look like.
Great subject, pose and perch.
I might try making the shot warmer too...not sure.
Just noticed...I'd get rid of some of the saturation of the blue in the shadows...particularly in the face area.
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The first shot, Omen, seems sharper to me. But the second one's name really works.
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I love that image. I played around with it a tad (adjusting contrast, warming it up, cropping out the tree on the left, etc.)
I got images that looked different but none that had the mood of your original. Cropping on the left loses the feel of the original so I wouldn't recommend that, Maybe cloning out the tree might work better. Warming it up a tad might improve it slightly also.
Your original is marvelous and I wouldn't play around with too much.
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