Nancy - C&C Welcome

Joe Dukovac

Here is the second set of shots that we took at 11AM, it was a bit warmer, but still cold. Anyway, if anyone has any comments please fire away!

Thanks,
Joe

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ivar

I really dig #3 and #8. I'm not too big of a fan of the last one. I like the idea, but the rail dead-center in the middle just doesn't work for me

System

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jeffreaux2

The post work in the first two should be re-worked. It appears that some lightening was done around her eyes....perhaps to lighten the areas under the shadow of the hat brim. The results posted here lack a true black point around the eye area. It looks odd.

Scott_Quier

jeffreaux2 wrote:

The post work in the first two should be re-worked. It appears that some lightening was done around her eyes....perhaps to lighten the areas under the shadow of the hat brim. The results posted here lack a true black point around the eye area. It looks odd.

And the reverse can be said for #5 - It appears you attempted to mask around your model and darken it a bit. But, you mask was not either complete or gradual enough - you have a halo around your model and it's quite distracting.

Aside from that and the last grouping (which I don't like - composition and pose are failing you here), you have a very sweet set of images.