I do like the many compositional elements: the beach, the mudflats with the birds, the deeper bay and the bridge. I do feel a bit constricted at the top with the bridge so close to the edge.
Nice depiction of exactly how SF Bay sometimes looks and feels.
There really isn't one subject or cohesion of the various subjects.
I think it would be nice shot from the deck and with more DOF. From that angle, we'd get the birds, mud and a little water which would tie the shot together. More DOF would keep the bridge but far enough back as to add background interest--and the lower angle would make it lower as well.
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There really isn't one subject or cohesion of the various subjects.
I think it would be nice shot from the deck and with more DOF. From that angle, we'd get the birds, mud and a little water which would tie the shot together. More DOF would keep the bridge but far enough back as to add background interest--and the lower angle would make it lower as well.
I agree to everything you say.
But the birds, those inconsiderate bas***rds fly away.
Add to that I couldn't find the way to set aperture priority and I couldn't see the image in the lcd........... :cry, well you should have seen the other four snaps that I deleted.
That P&S drove me to dslr's. I keep it in the car in case I have an accident. I have and it worked fine for that
Hey I might be out of line here but I like the shot as-is! The contrast of blue and yellow is particularly nice, and I like the layers created by the different horizontal elements.
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Nice depiction of exactly how SF Bay sometimes looks and feels.
I'm not a fan of the LCD as the only viewfinder.
thanks for looking & the comment
I think it would be nice shot from the deck and with more DOF. From that angle, we'd get the birds, mud and a little water which would tie the shot together. More DOF would keep the bridge but far enough back as to add background interest--and the lower angle would make it lower as well.
I agree to everything you say.
But the birds, those inconsiderate bas***rds fly away.
Add to that I couldn't find the way to set aperture priority and I couldn't see the image in the lcd........... :cry, well you should have seen the other four snaps that I deleted.
That P&S drove me to dslr's. I keep it in the car in case I have an accident. I have and it worked fine for that
I think you'd like shooting birds down at the Palo Alto duck pond. They're used to people now
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