My attempt at #39; Any thoughts or C&C?

slpollett

I've had this idea for days now & finally had a little bit of time to try it. I would certainly appreciate any thoughts or feedback anyone could offer. I could re-shoot maybe Saturday or Sunday if needed.

I'm thinking of naming this one "Remnants" and I have several different versions. Is the idea a decent one? Which one do you think works best? I would be so grateful for any feedback on any of these.

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For this idea, I was thinking of naming it "Choices." Is this idea better than the first one? I have different color paper options (& maybe some that isn't foil to be so darned reflective!). Should I try those? Any other feedback always appreciated.

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Thanks so much for taking a look and a BIG thank you to anyone who takes the time to leave a comment.

Sherry

ps: I shot these using natural light in the late afternoon. I want to try morning light if I have a chance.:D

nightpixels

Nice series. I like the vivid color, sharpness, and the contrast of the last one (#7).

slpollett

Thank you Allan. My daughter likes #6, my Mom likes #1 &#4. I also like #7 the best of this bunch, but think I like the 'idea' of the first set better. I just didn't 'quite' get what I thought I wanted.

Thanks again.

Sherry

WhatSheSaw

I like the closer perspective in #6. I think the first set is a bit busy and disordered.

AndMan

I also prefer the closer perspective of #6, but I can see Allen's point about the sharpness of #7, maybe reshoot .

Kinkajou

I also enjoy #7. Something about it (besides the sharpness) seems a little bit more comfortable to me... might be the distance from/size of the rolls.

slpollett

Thanks to Whatshesaw, Andman, & Kinkajou for your comments. I guess the first set is too cluttered (maybe that's what was bothering me that I couldn't put my finger on). I may try that again this weekend if I have time, with less scraps & maybe a little different composition.

It looks like #7 is the winner from this bunch, so I may also try that one again to see if I can get it a little better.

Thanks again.
Sherry

Chaoslillith

How does it fit the paper or plastic theme? They are great pictures but not sure how they fit into paper or plastic.

Just asking.

Tango

#6 for me

ic4u

It's a toss up between 6 and 7 for me

slpollett

Chaoslillith wrote:

How does it fit the paper or plastic theme? They are great pictures but not sure how they fit into paper or plastic.

Just asking.

Everything you see in each of the pictures is gift wrapping paper. One of the pictures has a little bit of tissue paper visible. It's 100% all paper. I guess I thought that hit the theme dead on, lol.

Thanks Aaron & Karin. I appreciate the feedback.

Sherry