This shot's biggest problem is distance. Had you gotten much closer, and filled the frame with the participants, you'd have much more. The subject is great and was definitely well seen but, in the words of the great B.D. (:D ), you needed to work it much more.
This shot's biggest problem is distance. Had you gotten much closer, and filled the frame with the participants, you'd have much more. The subject is great and was definitely well seen but, in the words of the great B.D. (:D ), you needed to work it much more.
, but you might be able to improve what you got by cropping it quite a bit. The four women are the story and everything else can go if you want.
Really great potential, unfortunately not realized.
Yes, as some have noted, cropping will help quite a bit. But this was one of those situations where you needed to push yourself and get close, wide, and low. It should have been shot from quite close to the, uh, largish woman on the end, with a wide lens, taking in the line of women. But you do get allot of points for seeing that you really had something here.
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I can't really find the focal point of the image...it all looks a little blurry. Maybe too slow of a shutter speed on this one.
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, but you might be able to improve what you got by cropping it quite a bit. The four women are the story and everything else can go if you want.
Really great potential, unfortunately not realized.
Yes, as some have noted, cropping will help quite a bit. But this was one of those situations where you needed to push yourself and get close, wide, and low. It should have been shot from quite close to the, uh, largish woman on the end, with a wide lens, taking in the line of women. But you do get allot of points for seeing that you really had something here.
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