DSS#39...seeking feedback please

ic4u

ETA a 4th picture...please take a look!

Haven't been around much lately, life kinda got in the way....but, I had a little time today to work on this theme, and I'm wondering if this idea is worth pursuing. Reshoots are definietly possible, as this house is never short on motorcycle magazines!
For a title at the moment I'm thinking of simply calling it "Collection", but open to any suggestions if this seems lame.
All feedback is welcome, be it good or bad!
Thanks for looking!

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WhatSheSaw

I like #2 best. The stacks are not as appealing. And I like the B&W. A circular pattern might be interesting.

tinamarie52

I like the B&W and would love it with more symmetry.

AndMan

WhatSheSaw wrote:

I like #2 best. The stacks are not as appealing. And I like the B&W. A circular pattern might be interesting.

ic4u

Thank you all for the input and suggestions, I'll see what I can come up with:D

ic4u

I've added a 4th image to my first post, based on your suggestions.
What do you think? Any suggestions?
Thanks!

tinamarie52

I like the new image. I'd crop a tad tighter to get rid of the dead corners or shoot tighter. I really like this one.

chris

WhatSheSaw

Agreed! Very nice.

travelways

I like #4

AndMan

tinamarie52 wrote:

I like the new image. I'd crop a tad tighter to get rid of the dead corners or shoot tighter. I really like this one.

chris

ic4u

Sounds good Thanks everyone!

Chaoslillith

4 rocks!!

ic4u

Chaoslillith wrote:

4 rocks!!

Thanks Choaslillith

Tango

I prefer your B&W treatment, how about incorporating one of your boys reading these...?

Chaoslillith

Ic..could you check my thread out and give some feedback. I am new to all this so could use all the help I can get. Would love the free smugmug for a year!!

ic4u

AaronNelson wrote:

I prefer your B&W treatment, how about incorporating one of your boys reading these...?

Hey Aaron,
nice to see you around again. I don't know about your kids, but my boys are hardly ever here anymore:cry between sports, and now my oldest has a job....I just don't know if I can tie them down long enough to figure out a shot, maybe this weekend...thanks for the suggestion!

ic4u

Chaoslillith wrote:

Ic..could you check my thread out and give some feedback. I am new to all this so could use all the help I can get. Would love the free smugmug for a year!!

I have been looking at it, and I will respond, I'm just studying it some more. BTW welcome

Tango

blackmail, Im sure you got the dirt on em....
they can sit for five minutes or else....

make him look injured and cant ride so he reads about riding...something like that... or or or, a million ideas...

anyway, out of the images you have posted I like #4, but would like to see the frame full and not have black corners...

oh, and Im just kinda sorta passing through, it was nice for you to say and notice.

slpollett

I like #4, also. The black & white works well with that shot.

Sherry

Chaoslillith

Ok thanks!!

I am excited at getting good feedback. I have crappy lighting in my house so shooting is always an experience in making my settings work. I do not have Photoshop or really any editing software other than Windows Photo Gallery and Picasa.