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MC #6 - 2nd guessing

GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
edited December 13, 2009 in The Dgrin Challenges
Hey all - sorry I haven't been real active lately. My head is spinning so fast I'm just trying to keep it on. :crazy Please let me know which you think is the stronger image for this challenge.

Seduction #1
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Seduction #2
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I have entered the first one, but you know how those doubts come along...

Any C&C very, very much appreciated!
Emily
Psalm 62:5-6

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    GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Or perhaps even a worked up version of this one:

    #3
    735838068_ZKc7b-L.jpg
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

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    pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Seduction #2, and may I say, " :jawdrop"
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    lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    #1--the one you entered is the strongest--IMO.
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    ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    I agree with Liz, your current entry is the best IMO, I think the pose she's in and the tilt plus the closeness seems much more seductive. But maybe you need some more guys opinions.....good luck!
    Karin


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    GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    ic4u wrote:
    I agree with Liz, your current entry is the best IMO, I think the pose she's in and the tilt plus the closeness seems much more seductive. But maybe you need some more guys opinions.....good luck!

    Haha! I was wondering if the face vs. whole body was more of a guy vs. girl appeal type of thing. I have a feeling it's going to be six of one, half a dozen of the other.
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

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    WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    I personally think #1 is a better image. But I am of the female persuasion, so I asked my husband. He concurs that #1 is the better image, but thinks that #3 is the most seductive.
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    AndManAndMan Registered Users Posts: 1,252 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    I think #1 is a beautiful image clap.gif.
    That said, #2 SCREAMS "seduction" to me, in fact I'll see pyroprint's :jawdrop and raise bowdown.gifbow it is a wonderful image.

    I think Liz may be right that in the context of the challenge #1 is the stronger image, it is easier for the viewer to make a connection with the subject given her proximity to the viewer. In my very humble opinion #1 says "sensual" or "anticipation" to me perhaps more than "seduction".

    Both are stunning images in any event.
    Peter

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    slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,194 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    All three are nicely done (love the mood lighting!), but I like #1 the best. I agree with Andman that 'Sensual' is the word that comes to mind for me when I look at that photo. clap.gifclap.gifclap.gif

    Sherry
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    dlplumerdlplumer Registered Users Posts: 8,081 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    All of these self-portraits are excellent Emilymwink.gif
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    TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Seduction #1 slightly caught my attention...



    :oogle
    Aaron Nelson
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    GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    dlplumer wrote:
    All of these self-portraits are excellent Emilymwink.gif

    rolleyes1.gif I guess I'll take it as a compliment at the mere suggestion that it could even...possibly...ever...in this life be me!
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

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    CWSkopecCWSkopec Registered Users Posts: 1,325 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Gorgeous model and amazing photos!! clap.gif

    All 3 are great, but #2 is absolute seduction!! :oogle
    Chris
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    Aspecto5Aspecto5 Registered Users Posts: 311 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    I'm going to go with #2 for a few reasons. The candles and petals help lead the eyes straight up to the model. The softness of the model herself is really appealing. I like #1, but her hair seems a little messy (not sure how to say that as nice as possible. Lol!), and the tilt is just a little too much. All this is just my opinion of course, for I'm not a pro. Just pointing out what strikes me at first glance. Excellent job though with the lighting!:D
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    TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009

    Seduction #1
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    ok, now that I have recovered from the initial shock of how drawing this image is, let me comment:

    Catchlighting from the candles, Check! Seduction? Yes.
    Lighting is warm & rich, topped with soft shadows, Check! Seduction? Yes.
    Pose matched with Tilt for effect works so well here, Check! Seduction? Yes.

    Random mentions: DOF, ummm wow!
    Also, you have included just enough surroundings to place her in a setting.
    Position of her eyes perfect, lips perfect, hands not distracting...all excellent.
    Now Emily I think you have showed great skills in your photography & postprocessing.thumb.gif FWIW from me....


    Aspecto5, Bro I gotta disagree with your views on her hair in this case. In this case I see an element of reality never seen within a sterile photoshopped sex sells type of shot. This has "Real" personality! IMO.
    Aaron Nelson
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    tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    All 3 are great shots. But, I have to say that #1 says seduction best.
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    ChaoslillithChaoslillith Registered Users Posts: 126 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Female here and I say 2:

    It has that anticipation feel to it. I guess I should look at what the challenge is aiming for :) however to me 2 is the most appealing.

    3 seems a bit not seductive but more no offense stripperesque.

    1. The tilt of the camera bugs me for some reason it takes a second for me to orient on her.

    2. There is no mistaking that this is about her desire to do all sorts of naughty and awesome things to the person that will be walking up that petal path. It is a definite invitation to be seduced.

    Just my opinion.
    Photography teaches us to observe again. Me.
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    GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Thanks for all of the great comments!

    FWIW, I "did" her hair. It was a very intensional mussed look. mwink.gif
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

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    ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited December 11, 2009
    Thanks for all of the great comments!

    FWIW, I "did" her hair. It was a very intensional mussed look. mwink.gif

    And it worksthumb.gif
    Personally I hope you stick with this one, but there seems to be a good mix of favorites here.
    I guess you can say that's a good thing, ya done good!
    Karin


    "Dance like no one is watching. Sing like no one is listening. Love like you've never been hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth." — Mark Twain
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    travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited December 12, 2009
    I personally prefer #1
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    trevortrevor Registered Users Posts: 29 Big grins
    edited December 12, 2009
    I like #3 best, but with a tighter crop -- maybe a square aspect ratio?
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    bf2015bf2015 Registered Users Posts: 523 Major grins
    edited December 12, 2009
    Where's that damn avatar I'm looking for? ....not here...oh well..

    As Aaron said, now that I've recovered, I've got to agree with AndMan. #1 says "sensual", #2 says "SEDUCTION!!", and #3...well...yeah...there's #3. mwink.gif

    I would say #2 IMGO (In My Guy Opinion). To me, it says seduction because the candles and flowers lead the viewer to the model's feet and then straight up. That's seduction.

    :D
    Brian
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    dlscott56dlscott56 Registered Users Posts: 1,324 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2009
    I'm a little late but I prefer the one you have submitted (#1). Good luck Emily.
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    GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited December 13, 2009
    Thanks all!!! Sticking with the original.
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

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