Daisy (18+) C&C

justin24

So a model I worked with previously on a different shoot wanted to do a nude shoot. This is my first official nude shoot and would like to get some opinions or what I can do different, what you liked or didn't like.

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justin24

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anonymouscuban

#6 is the best shot IMO. Pose is nice, flatters her. The lighting is also good. I like it in B&W too.

The others not too sure about. They all seem pretty dark, both from a lighting and a mood perspective. When view them, I couldn't help but feel like I need to sit down to talk to this girl about her troubles. Not sure if that's the mood you were trying to capture but thats how they made me feel.

angevin1

Kudos to you both for giving it a try. The dark moodiness can work, but this gal has dark eyes, and will really require lots of light or correct lighting to get her eyes to light up~

#'s 2 & 6 are my personal fav's. I'd work on getting the settings better.

Try sketches, even stick drawings work, or finding other photos to emulate.

But, really Both 2 and 6 are quite nice, except the lighting...and that of course is a matter of taste~

Wineman

Good pics, with a beautiful model, as mentioned they seem a little dark, I like number 3 and number 5 (this one has harsh shadows... but still i like), number 2 has a sun growing out of her head.

Number 6 is awesome, except of the dark eyes...

ans I see a lot of clothing marks that are really distracting.

thanks for sharing.

Z.

Oscarc

I really like #5.

BMW Kurt

I like 2 & 5. Can you shop out the sun in 2? Then I would love 2!

justin24

Yeah, I will try later today. Thank you for the feedback. I am planning another shoot with Daisy and another model I worked with before.