DSS 40 Feedback Please

dlplumer

I'd like your feedback on concept, execution and title.

Thanks.

Paper Or Plastic
Paradise Lost or
Duck Killer

divamum

Concept: Like a LOT
Execution: great bokeh/use of DOF; not sure about the bag being centered, especially since right-hand duck's wake pulls eye to the right hand side
Title: "Paradise Lost"

travelways

I like the idea of the "Paradise Lost"

davev

For me, you need more trash for it to be tragic.

tinamarie52

I like the concept and lighting, but it seems too staged.... as if you could just reach out and remove that plastic bag and tragedy is avoided.... which makes it less tragic. Does that make sense?

Chris

dlplumer

Here is another attempt. What do you think?

By the way, just for the record, this shot was not staged. I watched a family carelessly leave this bag on the ground after feeding the ducks. I did manage to remove it however.

WhatSheSaw

I like this one much more than the previous one.

AndMan

#2 +1