First try at HDR

BsimonBsimon Registered Users Posts: 252 Major grins
edited December 26, 2009 in Landscapes
Looking for your insight on what could have been done better.

By the way, for those of you in the market for the software, I was able to get Photomatix pro for 39.60 by entering my student email ending in .edu

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  • Nikonic1Nikonic1 Registered Users Posts: 684 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2009
    I like this, but I think a few things could help add some drama to the HDR. Mainly, a more dramatic (add clouds/different light in a reshoot) sky to give some depth to the layering of different exposures. This would also add some reflections to the the roof that could prove interesting once your HDR work was complete.

    The only other suggestion I have would be to crop out the shadow from the missing lightpole coming from the right. Not only would this delete a distraction from your subject, it would do some to get your main subject out of the center of the image.

    Nice work overall, keep it up. clap.gifthumb
  • BsimonBsimon Registered Users Posts: 252 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2009
    Thanks for your input. thumb.gif Adjusting now in LR.

    Here is another from today.

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  • Nikonic1Nikonic1 Registered Users Posts: 684 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2009
    Also, it would be helpful if you could post a bit smaller images for easier viewing.

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  • BsimonBsimon Registered Users Posts: 252 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2009
    Re-sized, thanks for the input.thumb.gif
  • BsimonBsimon Registered Users Posts: 252 Major grins
    edited December 26, 2009
    And finally, here is the same scene from after sunset. Around 6pm or so.

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