B/W People at the roof of Oslo Opera House

tropicotropico Registered Users Posts: 225 Major grins
edited December 31, 2009 in Street and Documentary
I took this photo this summer and wanted to share it with you.
I think it is kind of abstract with all the lines.

Anything I could do to improve this?

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http://www.monicagarrett.com

Canon 5D MARK II, Canon EOS 450D
Canon 24-70mm f/2.8L, Canon 18-55mm
Canon 50mm 1.8, Canon 75-300mm, Tokina 10-24mm, Sigma 18-200mm

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  • tropicotropico Registered Users Posts: 225 Major grins
    edited December 31, 2009
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    Maybe it is so bad that it is not possible to improve?
    http://www.monicagarrett.com

    Canon 5D MARK II, Canon EOS 450D
    Canon 24-70mm f/2.8L, Canon 18-55mm
    Canon 50mm 1.8, Canon 75-300mm, Tokina 10-24mm, Sigma 18-200mm
  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited December 31, 2009
    I'm just not connecting with the image. Definitely too far away. Is there a relationship between the two pairs of people or is this simply a study of shadows and light?

    For this image, I would probably crop to the lower-half, ~middle-third to isolate the people and shadows. I don't think there's much need for the diagonal wall that runs through the frame unless you are specifically studying the geometry and architecture. Even then, I'd want more people or closer views of the ones that are there.
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