have you tried different crops? right now, the boy and horizon are nearly dead center. Try less sky or more fence and less field on the right? play with it!
I'd give it a nice horizontal crop so that the trail comes from the lower right of the image and you have equal parts sky and trail. I used the browser window to mask a little and it looked better to me like that.
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The shot has some excellent elements in it that the cropping may improve. I actually encourage you to try cropping the bottom instead of the sky. Keeping the child centered may work and now gives the impression of ascending into the sky/future...
I really think that the tree adds to the image and prefer the first shot. If anything I would crop the sky a little less than 1/2 way down to the tree top. This would raise the boy a bit from vertical center. I like the horizontal centering of the boy. I prefer to crop the top rather than the bottom which would diminish the symbolism of the long, sometimes difficult, path we travel from childhood to maturity.
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BTW I really like this image! Well done.
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Thank you!
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