concept feedback request

rhoffart

Hello … trying something different and was wondering if I can get a little feedback. I ran across a guy (Terry) that makes “bent objects” so I asked him if he would mind if I gave it a try and he said go for it ...

here are the results so far … http://rhoffart.smugmug.com

I'm looking for some feedback from someone other then my wife and daughter. So I thought about posting here. Thanks for your time.


Rick

rhoffart

if I posted this in the wrong place please direct me ... thanks

wxwax

I admire the way you staged and lit the scenes. Very nice work.

The figures themselves don't do much for me, as there are right now. Not sure what's missing, maybe it's personality, not sure.

rhoffart

wxwax wrote:

The figures themselves don't do much for me, as there are right now. Not sure what's missing, maybe it's personality, not sure.

thanks Sid, I think I'll get better with time, I actually took a snap shot of my daughter in the desired position of each figure ... then tried to recreate the position.

Angelo

wxwax wrote:

I admire the way you staged and lit the scenes. Very nice work.

The figures themselves don't do much for me, as there are right now. Not sure what's missing, maybe it's personality, not sure.

It's a creative idea that just needs a little refinement and development

rhoffart

Angelo wrote:

It's a creative idea that just needs a little refinement and development

thanks Angelo ...