My fiancee gladly agreed to model for me, and while I took hundreds, kept 100 or so, and actually posted about 50, these are my ten favorite shots. C&C very welcome, enjoy!
Well, if one things for sure, your fiance is gorgeous....oh wait...we're talking about photos here......
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#3 is my favorite with #7 being right there too. I really like #8 also but that one little blown out spot is distracting me from viewing your subject 100%.
I like the idea of #10 but the angle makes my eyes do funny things.
All in all, very nice though and congrats on your pending marriage thumb
Well, if one things for sure, your fiance is gorgeous....oh wait...we're talking about photos here......
Sorry, back on topic.....
#3 is my favorite with #7 being right there too. I really like #8 also but that one little blown out spot is distracting me from viewing your subject 100%.
I like the idea of #10 but the angle makes my eyes do funny things.
All in all, very nice though and congrats on your pending marriage thumb
Thanks, Nikonic. #3 was actually luck, she was readjusting the scarf, and I decided to start shooting and that was the best of the bunch. I was very excited when I saw it.
You have a great start here. On the first one the flash didn't go off. (sorry too easy I couldn't resist). I like it alot. I like #2. Clean up the hair some and watch for cutting off the hand. Sort of makes it look awkard. #3 the hot spot is distracting. Remember bright areas draw you attention first. You look there before looking at her. You made great use of overhangs, that helps you lighting. I like 4 but the background is a little distracting. 5 seems to have some facial distortion. Just a few ideas to help. Overall you have a very good start.
You have a great start here. On the first one the flash didn't go off. (sorry too easy I couldn't resist). I like it alot. I like #2. Clean up the hair some and watch for cutting off the hand. Sort of makes it look awkard. #3 the hot spot is distracting. Remember bright areas draw you attention first. You look there before looking at her. You made great use of overhangs, that helps you lighting. I like 4 but the background is a little distracting. 5 seems to have some facial distortion. Just a few ideas to help. Overall you have a very good start.
Thanks for the critique, Hackbone. I agree completely with #3, and if I didn't absolutely love the rest of it, I wouldn't have posted it for that very fact, but I just think the moment is worth it. Thanks for the tip on #2, I'm obviously an amateur, and she has never done any real modelling so we just sort of looked around in magazines, and did what we thought looked best. I had to stylize 5 a bit, it was very overexposed, but I guess I took it a little too far. 4, I'm not sure what you mean with the background, but I'll keep that in mind for future shots!
I really appreciate all the comments, I will put them to good use!
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Sorry, back on topic.....
#3 is my favorite with #7 being right there too. I really like #8 also but that one little blown out spot is distracting me from viewing your subject 100%.
I like the idea of #10 but the angle makes my eyes do funny things.
All in all, very nice though and congrats on your pending marriage
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Thanks, Nikonic. #3 was actually luck, she was readjusting the scarf, and I decided to start shooting and that was the best of the bunch. I was very excited when I saw it.
You have a great start here. On the first one the flash didn't go off. (sorry too easy I couldn't resist). I like it alot. I like #2. Clean up the hair some and watch for cutting off the hand. Sort of makes it look awkard. #3 the hot spot is distracting. Remember bright areas draw you attention first. You look there before looking at her. You made great use of overhangs, that helps you lighting. I like 4 but the background is a little distracting. 5 seems to have some facial distortion. Just a few ideas to help. Overall you have a very good start.
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Thanks for the critique, Hackbone. I agree completely with #3, and if I didn't absolutely love the rest of it, I wouldn't have posted it for that very fact, but I just think the moment is worth it. Thanks for the tip on #2, I'm obviously an amateur, and she has never done any real modelling so we just sort of looked around in magazines, and did what we thought looked best. I had to stylize 5 a bit, it was very overexposed, but I guess I took it a little too far. 4, I'm not sure what you mean with the background, but I'll keep that in mind for future shots!
I really appreciate all the comments, I will put them to good use!