No Wind

MachineAgeMachineAge Registered Users Posts: 17 Big grins
edited January 7, 2010 in Landscapes
which made for a good sunset but a frustrating sail. Minimal processing but I'm thinking it could use a little more punch.

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  • TreyHoffTreyHoff Registered Users Posts: 388 Major grins
    edited January 7, 2010
    Very nice. The clouds and light on the sail are great! Good compositional positioning on the sun and boat. I think I would prefer to crop out the dark wave....it would keep my eye from wandering away from the sailboat.
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  • anwmn1anwmn1 Registered Users Posts: 3,469 Major grins
    edited January 7, 2010
    I am torn on this shot. I like all the glare from the sun and like the sailboat as it stands out and even has some reflections of its own.

    Some depth in the sky might help as it feels very flat but the image also feels very stretched. Besides the flares from the sun and the boat there is really nothing else going on or anything to visually lead you from one to the other. There just seems to be a left side and a right side to this. ne_nau.gif
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