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Miss(ing) Monroe

Steve WiencekSteve Wiencek Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
edited January 9, 2010 in Street and Documentary
Excuse Me, Miss Monroe...
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    RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,937 moderator
    edited January 9, 2010
    Looks like the highlights are a little blown, but I really like #2. At first glance, it seems like the walking tourists are really downtrodden amidst all the Hollywood junk. Then I realized what they were looking at. Very good work. thumb.gif
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    bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2010
    Steve Wiencek wrote:

    I'd concentrate a touch more on the shots, and a touch less on the captions.rolleyes1.gif The first one simply doesn't work - but it might have if you'd tried to move to the left, around her hand, and also watched all the blown highlights. As it is, my eyes have to struggle to figure out what's going on.

    The second one, as Richard noted, is a good shot, but, again, the blown highlights really detract.
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    Wil DavisWil Davis Registered Users Posts: 1,692 Major grins
    edited January 9, 2010
    2nd one looks skewed, and I don't like the vignetting…

    …and the hand in #1 is v. ugly…

    but apart from that, it's OK…

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