DSS 41...looking for feedback please

ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
edited January 10, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
Boy I feel like I've been in a creative slump lately!
Hoping to get a little feedback, positive or negative, no matter! Reshoots are possible if it's worth pursuing.
For a title, I'm thinking...
Spiraling out of control at age 3!
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ETA....Heres another perspective
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Thanks for looking!
Karin


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  • JerryBartonJerryBarton Registered Users Posts: 147 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    That second one catches my eye - the first I find confusing. Perhaps some spiral dodging can help to increase the perception of depth.
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  • karlabbottkarlabbott Registered Users Posts: 401 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    Agree with Jerry here -- the composition of #2 is much more pleasing and eye catching. With #1, I had to work to see how the shoes fit in. With #2, that is much more apparent.

    #2 is quite nice and fits the theme very well :Dthumb.gif
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    Thanks for the feedback, Jerry and Karlthumb.gif
    Any reccommendations on processing?
    Karin


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  • JerryBartonJerryBarton Registered Users Posts: 147 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    well, if it were I, I would use saturation/lightness to show a progression of strong/bright to dark with the shoes, leaving the stairs and the beautiful girl the way they are.
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    Second one - the shoes are much clearer and I like the perspective too
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  • KevXmanKevXman Registered Users Posts: 945 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    Another vote for #2.
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    photo-bug wrote:
    Second one - the shoes are much clearer and I like the perspective too
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  • ic4uic4u Registered Users Posts: 1,455 Major grins
    edited January 10, 2010
    Thanks Tatiana, Kevin and Pyro.
    I made a few adjustments in processing and entered #2
    Karin


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